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Lol @BrunoGame, seriously did you just say that?  Your worried about things that are bad for you like NTR?  HAHAH OMG Seriously that has got to be the dumbest thing I ever heard.  Your on a Site full of games (Alpha's, Beta's etc) that involve sex of all kinds and many different Kinks.  An you are worried about big bad NTR?  I seriously doubt NTR is the worst thing or baddest thing you do daily.  LOL

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  Hello KKpotato, I love your game I do, it's got a lot of hard work put in to it and the story is great.  When I first played it I loved how you could do almost anything and choose any choices you want.  But sadly I think something Changed.  I just had a meeting with Rivera and could have sex with her.  But it seems that the thing that changed is the choices.  There is only the illusion of choice now.  There is actually no longer the freedom of choice.  Given whatever you been doing up to a certain point in the game you are locked out of other choices.  I do apologize for saying you ruined the game.

  But what you have done makes no sense.  When you Start you have 5 stats Intelligence, Karma, Dominance, Lust, Reflex.  An those Stats, can raise or lower given whatever choice you choose.

  So lets say you want intelligence, you get +1 it and -1 or 0 something else or vice versa.  That seems simple enough and straight forward.  But here is the catch given if your a sleaze and screw everything with 2 legs you could end up ruining your relationship with the 5 main girls and locked out of choices.

  But here is the next catch, if your loyal to the 5 main girls.  Then yes you guessed it locked out of choices involving any other girls.  Seems Simple Right?  But NOPE you also have to have the Required LUST and Stats to be able to make said Choice. 

  So that is why I said the game is ruined unless your 100% following the walk through and if that is the case don't even play the game and read the walk through since it will be like reading a book or novel without the pictures.

Hmm, Thanks for the reply.  I kinda understand but not really.  The only reason I mentioned the Blonde girl is cause she works at the Theater also with Nina.  Alternate routes?  So if I am understanding correctly basically your saying whatever choice I make in the game can open or close other routes?  An Trigger Dates would be like the going shopping with Wife and Daughter, Or to the swimming pool?  Trigger dates like that?  Special days of the week you can only do certain things?

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Hey Xagrim, question if you don't mind.  I don't mind the Grinding or the going to work every morning of the game those things are fun.  But I am curious as to why you lock, block, cut off events?  I guess a example would be Nina and the Blonde girl who works at the theater.  I have gotten Nina's scenes and continued from there.  But the Blonde girl is locked for some reason most I can do is give her Books and it ends there.  So I guess my question is are you blocking content?  Like you can do things with Nina or the Blonde but you can't do things with Both, it's one or the other?  Cause I have tried and restarted MANY times and it seems no matter my choices, stats or whatever.  A lot of what you could do in the beginning are being locked out.  Like you are "Forcing" people to follow one path the end all of the be all, a way to force multi play through.  An if that's the case it's not worth it to play.  What I meant by not worth it to play is.  The first thing you say is "A sandbox VN (open world like)"  Well it's either a Open World or it is Linear.  I think that's the first thing you should decide before you make anymore updates.  It's either Open World or it's Linear there's no it's like both.  That would be like me saying I have "like a million dollars to invest in your project."  An then saying oh it's only $1

Hey WeirdWorld, I have a Question about your Baby, Creation, Game, Superhuman.  I have tried it awhile back and it seemed cool.  But something seems odd to me.  You seem to give it a lot of room saying " How will you use this power? To seduce? To kill? Or do you simply want to live your life as a college freshman without worry? "  When I played it last like awhile ago.  It didn't seem at all like you could do any of that.  To be Honest it seems like forced game play.  Sure you can do what you like but lets say you wanted to ONLY be a college fresh men.  Your dedicated a game over or killed.  So it's train or die and sure a few things you can do on the side.  But if you miss training and get weak "yup, you die game over"  So has it changed or is it still like that?  An on a side note is it really " Beware optional NTR and Gender Bender. It's optional, but it's there."  Cause gotta say maybe a max of what 5 scene's is NTR or Gender Bender? "  It's like you just put the tag there so people didn't bitch when they seen it.  Unless you plan on adding more or making the MC able to full time female I would just remove that comment.  Cause it would be like saying " Kill one man, and you are a murderer. Kill millions of men, and you are a conqueror. Kill them all, and you are a God "

Vasilia, I know your trying to make a good game really I do.  I tried your new reworked and to be honest OUCH.  Everything people liked or the reviews I read people liked the game.  It was just that one simple issue, the fact that there was No status System, the Fact that you didn't know what choices did what, the fact that you didn't know if any of the choices you made were good or bad, positive or negative.  It WASN'T for me the Story or the way it was presented.  It was getting to a choice in the game where you could NOT in no way, shape or form continue cause you didn't have the REQUIRED Rep or Stats.  How do we know what those are without the System.  Others besides me have commented on that also.  Please keep the Original one and not the reworked one.  You don't have to completely start over.  Just simply add in a Status or Rep system and proceed from there.  It will save time and I am sure others will agree.

ok Thank you.  Just wanted you to know cause I really love your game.

Incest GamesNon-Incest GamesBad Memories – Version 0.8.5

https://incestgames.net/bad-memories-version-0-1/

Hey BM_Rec question.  Did someone steal your game or clone it or do you have two names?  Cause same exact name and same version but it's Male Protagonist only. 

Hey Stiffman, I think I found a bug or break in your game.  I am like stuck majorly.  I am at Stage 1, 101% but on Stage 2 I am at 18% and it does nothing.  I keep being told have to eat breakfast in the morning with mom but she doesn't eat breakfast and just leaves.  I been told to speak to Val at college and she doesn't do anything but the same conversation about you tutoring Bry.  Then Bry comes over on weekend and does nothing won't tell me nothing and leaves.  Then I got told go to pool saturday morning and Bry will be there, she is still in kitchen doing dishes for val.  An nothing on Lana, Lyn or Mari.  Plus the gym thing with Val is broken also.  You get points if you let her continue but if you turn her down you lose points.  An that's it, I have tried different combinations or different answers nothing.  Your game is just dead there.  So might want to check your coding or see if something changed in your updates.  Cause as it stands right now it is a dead game.  There's no reason to play or buy it if it's this broke.

 Honestly it's a Great Game / Visual Novel.  But as much as I want to say Support the Developer, I would avoid it like the Plaque.  If you buy it here on itch.io the developer does NOT update it on itch.io.  He takes your money and gives you the game yes.  But if you want a more up to date version he makes you do a monthly sub on Patreon.  So it's like 100%  greedy ass Dev.  So those people who have supported him on itch.io are getting fucked over cause he isn't updating on itch.io.  If he would quit being a asshole and fucking people over.  He should just shut down this page on itch.io regarding his game and focus on Patreon.  But as the old saying goes he wants his cake and to eat it also.  But he is to greedy he will keep it here thinking anyone who is stupid enough to see it on itch.io buy it and think they are getting updates when they aren't.  So DON'T FEED the DEVELOPER here!  Instead down vote this game and warn others.

Thanks for the quick reply.  It was interesting, not exactly bad.  But did see a few improvements that could be made.  It seemed like you spent more time J.O. just so you could do the scene's and that seemed like what 9 am till 4 pm you spent J.O. just so you could lose 5 arousal.  I understand the concept it just seems a tad Grindy, and that kinda ruins it.  But the story was awesome just wish they said more at Breakfast and Dinner instead of repeats.  Plus when you get towards the end of current version it was like the sex was cut out cause there was no scene or nothing just everyone left the table.  It's a good start just if you actually quit looking for the sex and more story you'll see the things that are not there.  Like Layla coming over, or calling one of the girls.  Cause you make 10 arousal VERY easily and can only lose maybe 20 or 25 per day, an that's Morning.  So look at it this way no matter what at night your 100% arousal and then 7 am your maybe at 80% and then shower your at 60% or 70% "don't have game opened atm."  But breakfast is +10 arousal and then you call someone or go over to neighbors and it's no increase or it's 10 to 20% increase.  So your back home to J.O. and your down to maybe 80% plus you wasted what 4 or 5 hours maybe more trying to lower it.  I mean if you could do something so it's not so grindy or remove the whole system of at 100% arousal you lose MORE but at less then 100% you lose less.  I don't want to waste the whole day trying to bring him down so can see the scene's only for him to goto sleep and you start over with the same issue.

Hey CA Games this was a interesting game a lot of grinding but was fun.  But have a curious question why does it say it's Version 0.2.3 but when it ends it shows / says "That's the end of version 0.2.2."  Did something happen or whats going on?

wow just wow.  Worst game ever!  I feel like I want to kill whoever the hell made this game.  Seriously Pixelated Graphics?  I mean seriously I couldn't even stand 2 minutes of it.  Feels like something out of the high 1970's and early 80's.  Just looking at it made me not even want to test it out.  Plus it was so bad and I mean "!?BAD?!" like SERIOUSLY bad the writing on the door was just TERRIBLE that I ALMOST couldn't even read welcome new kid on the door.  If that's what it even showed cause it was that BADLY!

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@Arikania, Honestly no clue.  This developer has something great and people want to see it and support them.  Just sadly the one flaw in their game is there is no Affection Stat or Rep Stat.  So just playing it blindly kinda cause's the game to just end, since you don't have the required Rep to proceed.  An most people won't play a game like that.  It's like buying a $200,000 Vehicle only to have no gas gauge, why would I want to drive a vehicle that could go 800 miles or 8 inches.  Same with his game, people won't put time and effort in to playing it only to get a "Can not Proceed."  So to answer your question maybe he is putting a stat system in or maybe he abandoned it.

@quad_ronin Honestly that's not exactly the way I see it.  Sure he wants to be a Hero, I think almost all boys growing up want to be one.  No one wakes up one morning and says I want to be a Villain or "Antihero".  Plus the story alone even shows how helpful he is and how he is always trying to protect others.  Minus the way he gets his abilities yes that I suppose could be "Antihero" but it's not like he runs around raping hero's just for their powers or even at all.

  But I am glad you like it.  Just as the old saying goes "Don't Judge a Book by it's cover."

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

  File "renpy/common/00director.rpy", line 293, in interact

    show_director = interact_base()

  File "renpy/common/00director.rpy", line 248, in interact_base

    if [ i for i in renpy.scriptedit.nodes_on_line(filename, line) if not isinstance(i, ALONE_NODES) ]:

IOError: [Errno 2] No such file or directory: u'w\\Ivents\\Ivents_Eldotan.rpyc'

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Full traceback:

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 97, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 97, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 97, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_school.rpyc", line 92, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 97, in script call

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  File "w/Locations/Location_mom_home.rpyc", line 140, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_mom_home.rpyc", line 129, in script call

  File "map.rpyc", line 102, in script call

  File "map.rpyc", line 102, in script call

  File "map.rpyc", line 225, in script call

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  File "Telephone.rpyc", line 175, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 135, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 135, in script call

  File "map.rpyc", line 102, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 65, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_mom_home.rpyc", line 18, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 65, in script call

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  File "w/Locations/Location_mom_home.rpyc", line 91, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_mom_home.rpyc", line 116, in script call

  File "map.rpyc", line 102, in script call

  File "w/Ivents/mini_games.rpyc", line 200, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 102, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 102, in script call

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  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 102, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 102, in script call

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  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 102, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 102, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 102, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 102, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 102, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 102, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 36, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 36, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 36, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 36, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 36, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 36, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 142, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 36, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 36, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 65, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 65, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 65, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 65, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 65, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 65, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 65, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 65, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_kabinet.rpyc", line 142, in script call

  File "w/Locations/Location_my_home.rpyc", line 36, in script call

  File "w/Locations/klub/klub_komnata_bekka.rpyc", line 11, in script call

  File "w/Locations/klub/klub_komnata_rayli.rpyc", line 12, in script call

  File "w/Locations_Eldoran/Location_tavern.rpyc", line 15, in script call

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  File "renpy/ast.py", line 721, in execute

    renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)

  File "renpy/exports.py", line 1417, in say

    who(what, *args, **kwargs)

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    self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, dtt=dtt, **display_args)

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    **display_args)

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    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)

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    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)

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  File "renpy/parser.py", line 239, in list_logical_lines

    with open(filename, "rb") as f:

IOError: [Errno 2] No such file or directory: u'w\\Ivents\\Ivents_Eldotan.rpyc'

Windows-10-10.0.19041

Ren'Py 7.4.10.2178

Corrupted World 0.1.7-public

Wed Sep 28 11:39:13 2022

Never heard of such a error?  I was playing on PC and I damn sure have the error cause I can't even play now.  No matter what save file I open up it is corrupted.  I deleted the main save file I was using cause assumed that would correct it.  But it didn't and now all my saves are corrupted.  I'll show you and send a trace of me opening a new file.

Hey fessix kinda found a flaw in your game and a major flaw at that cause it destroys your save files an even if you reload one previous to the flaw it destroys that also.  I was in Eld doing the doppelganger quest and was about to go over the wall.  Which there was no warning, instructions, no hits no nothing.  Just a garbage alphabet Letter 1 of 26 that showed on the screen that didn't say if you press the letter, hold the letter down, spam the letter or nothing.  It was just a letter and then a tab on the top of the screen opens with some kinda code and you got a shit load off errors, saying reload, ignore etc and there goes your save file.  So Thanks to your glitch I just lost 8 hours work.  Thanks kindly for that.  FA!

So am curious here is the game dead?  Cause honestly Subscibestar only has one post for July 12th and that's a gallery or something.  An Patreon is well July 30th something about a Graphics card and nothing else.  An honestly latest post was 3 months ago.  So is the game dead or what's going on cause this is 3 sites with nothing regarding the game.

Hello Vasilisa I am glad your back working on the Project.  I truly do love it and the story.  I wouldn't mind supporting it really cause it seems it could grow in to something great.  There is just one thing that prevents me from that.  It's the fact that no matter what choice you make or choose which from what I can tell gives you a game over.  There's nothing showing or telling you if it's the right choices.  You just play the game and if you get a game over tough shit reload and try a different path.  Honestly most people won't play that way and it's probably why as you say you only make $100 a month.  Maybe if you fixed that with a stat system or affection system instead of the way it is now.  You might make more then $100 a month.

  I was a little concerned cause of all the Blending and the fact that it shows Male Genitalia, Plus the Man Hands and the comments saying "He" when clearly your Bio, Stats Page clearly shows a Female.  Now I am not trying to be a asshole or anything cause there is a Beginning Developer I have been supporting at Max Tier since they started out and now they have 762 Patreons.  I even asked them to look in to your game cause of the Blending and such.  Cause you have such a Bold Idea and the Story really works.  But as I was told by this Developer "Chase 2 rabbits and you will lose them both, Try to please everyone and you will please none".  I really do want you to succeed but maybe you should focus on one and finish it before trying the other.  Cause some people might find it a turn off as I did and not support you.  Just a thought but thanks for your reply.

  Hey 3DRC, so a few things.  I do love the concept and some of the Story, it's nice how you can be Male or Female and you can select the relationship ( Aunt, Family Friend or Cousin.).  But honestly your kinda all over the Place.  Your Game or Visual Novel whatever you care to call it Plays like it wants to be a Male only MC.  I personally think you are to ambitious cause you wanted to give people a "choice" Drive Game play if you want to be Male or Female.  An then you get the crowd that Only wants to play as a Male MC and you Cater to them.  Then you get people trying the Female MC and some love it and some hate it.  But your ruining your own game cause you have your Basic BIO showing a female Body saying you are a FEMALE.  Then you get scene's showing a Male Hand, and Male Genitalia, and even conversations showing "He comments or are you "two a couple".  I would honestly love to support this game cause it has Promise.  But honestly you need to Decide if you want a Male or Female Only game.  Cause your Blending your game together trying to support two crowds and that never ends well.  Instead of people supporting you, your gonna get people criticizing you.  Sorry for the Book but just my personal thoughts.  I do hope it works out for you.

Great Job Raybae.  I am Honestly loving the story, finally it's not just about the sex.  Sure the sex is nice but honest seeing the MC is not a Douche and is actually trying to help the maid and the other characters are so diverse.  I really don't mind supporting you developers on Patreon, keep up the good work.  An honestly killer way to end that update now I am seriously waiting for the next update to see "Paige" :P  lol

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Ah Thank you kindly.  I do find your grammar quite alarming since you obviously don't know how to spell or to do complete sentences.  Use Spell check next time.  Plus my comment is not a Faulty Account and I don't do Negative reviews.  This is a CASH grab game.  The fact that he hides that behind some Shady BS is wrong.  If he is gonna add content behind a paywall instead of telling people up front then he deserves this review.  Cause people should know don't blow $8 here and then find out there's no COMPLETE game that some scenes are hidden behind a paywall and to get them you have to go to their Patreon Site and Pay $25 on top of the already $8 you paid for the game.  If you have a issue with me speaking the truth tough shit.

  An BTW do you even know what a paywall is moron?  It's where a Developer / Creator makes said Game, Visual Novel whatever and calls it complete, then hides content behind a paywall.  So in order to see said content you have to Purchase it!  So it's NOT a COMPLETE GAME that you just just paid them $8 for.  Your just paying for a Demo, Trial, whatever you care to call it.  Which if they, Void Star or whoever the hell wasn't being SHADY about it.  They would tell you that in the description instead of waiting, letting whatever you pay the $8 and find out "oh hey I can't see this content, cause I gotta pay the extra $25 on Patreon on top of the $8 I just paid here on itch.io."  So yes to me that is SHADY and people should KNOW.

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Ok so first Impressions.  It's really dated and then the equipment can only equip 3 gears at a time?  Plus from what I am seeing it's really Grindy, like you either choose exp try to level fast which you CAN'T since there's no skip or anything so just put your mouse on the spell so you can left click it and spam spacebar hoping, praying it goes faster.  That's just for the exp.  If you want Skills and I am assuming here the SP you get from letting them grope you at rank 5 you need to do EVERY fight or every monster just so you can get skill points.  Cause honestly levels alone and no skills will put you in a bad spot.

  An what my first 20 minutes or rather 30 minutes showed me is, wake up, go to forest, fight monsters till no energy or your out of mana then back home to sleep.  That's how this game plays.  Not a bad game really but that's my impression how it runs.  An the characters, companions, people, npc whatever you care to call them.  What good are choices when they don't show or tell you if you gained influence or lost?  It's like a 50/50 coin toss.  Might want to fix that.  Anyways I'll play for a little bit more see if it gets better.  Like I said only my beginning impression of it.

  Edit*  Ok so am a little farther in it.  I got to say your game REALLY REALLY REALLY sucks ass!  I am in Magma Mound and those fire rays all they do is fuck you.  There's no way to remove them and it takes so many tries to do so.  Then once you get one off it's back to them fucking you.  OMG that is so annoying and your game fucking sucks for that reason ALONE!

Ok so not sure how I found this game but thought would give it a try and to be honest I am a tad disappointed.  It honestly seems to me to be a cash Grab.  An the reason I say this is cause of what the Developer, Creator, whatever you care to call them is doing.  They are "Making you, Charging you $8 or more here on Itch.io."  But in the Game some events are LOCKED behind a paywall which they do NOT tell you about.  An example would be you pay the $8 here on Itch.io and expect to play the game your purchased.  But when you get to said events says "Locked behind Patreon Legend Tier."  Which by the way is a $25 SUB per month.  I understand it's your "game" and you have to make money on it.  But way to fuck people twice.  Why not give them the game for FREE and let them decide if they want to pay the $25 to support you.  Instead of give me $8 to TRY the game only to find out it's behind a paywall.  To me that is Shady and not a way to promote your game.  If your gonna do that at least tell the people so they can know the facts before trying or Paying for your game.

Hello After Choices.  I just found your game and I have to say it's not actually half bad.  I mean the thing I like the most is the way you switch between points of views.  It makes it feel more real to me and honestly I'd donate for that.  I am not sure how donations go cause you couldn't "Pay" me to use Patreon again that is a dead horse.  But if your on Subscribestar or some where else I'll gladly donate to help you fund this project.  An no matter what anyone says keep up the good work.

Ok so I am gonna be very blunt here, you have seriously nailed a Perfect Perfect Story here.  Yes there are a few Grammar errors but honestly not that bad.  An there's not really a lot of sex scene's but the story alone is just Great even without them.  This is a True Master Piece and if this is the type of work you do.  Hell I'd pay $25 or $50 a month for this.  You have really outdone yourself.  Keep up the work and I can't wait to see how it progresses.

Yeah sure, I am running PC.  An I know it's not my system cause I can run FFXIV in two different  Accounts Both on Ultimate Settings on once screen.  So I know it is not my PC.  An as for your comment on Post I am sensing bullshit.  Cause any developer can make a bullshit alt account and say it works fine. 

So I am warning people who don't have a potato for a PC avoid this game.  I did everything it said.  I downloaded it, saved it to my folders, extracted it.  An it does nothing even when I click the bullshit "No Saints Application 377,585KB file"  Which should of been a bullshit give away.  Cause I checked 15 of my downloads on VN's and the Least and Most KB that had for the Application start up was 100kb and 282kb  NOT 377,303 MORE.  So take your post and shove it up your ass.  

ok so I dunno about anyone else but this "Game" and I use that word very very loosely can not be played or even started.  I have downloaded thousands of Games and Visual novels from itch.io and patreon.  But this one is something special.  You can download it to your computer yes, and extract it yes but the moment you go to run as admin or even open it.  It shows on the task bar it is open but, that's it.  You can't tab to it, see it, or nothing.  It shows it's there but does NOTHING.  An the only way to close it is to end task it.  Plus I was playing 2 accounts of games while attempting to open this and run it, only for it to screw up my pc.  I had to restart it twice and what takes 15 seconds to load took me 2 minutes.  I wouldn't trust whatever this is.